Reviews for Elemental Beginnings
Odyssey2469 chapter 3 . 6/29/2004
Excellent, well thought out and written, one little note, it seemed like you were a little repetitive with your words, for example you always referred to it as a forest, try using more synonyms or something. Also you should raise your ratting level; I don’t think you can drop the F-bomb and still have it ‘G’ rated.
Yes I reviewed each chapter separately. Each was unique so I thought that each deserved its own review
Please kick the writers block and add more!
Odyssey2469 chapter 2 . 6/29/2004
A great start, it could almost be a story all its own
Well Written
Odyssey2469 chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
Very in-depth and well thought out