Reviews for SOLITARY
yume76 chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
A really nice portrayal. Only one thing to note though. You wrote "would of", which is incorrect, with all due respect. The correct wording is "would've", which is a contraction of "would have". Other then that, the story was quite inspiring. Kudos.
topyxyz chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Your stories are kinda short all the time. It's nice to make it a little longer to add detail..
olgite the squidgal chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
As always with your short stories, this is a well written, character-driven piece. I only wish that it was more detailed and longer. I'd like to read more of Brandon's life in jail, his ups and downs, and how he survived during those ten years.
Your Different October chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
I thought it was okay. Not exeptional, but okay. It seemed a little insipid, to be honest. Your writing is good, but...

I was interested in the beginning, but not really near the end. I feel like it didn't tell a story, not really. Kind of like you didn't deliver on what was promised.

I think the second to last line doesn't give the reader enough credit (VERY important). If the reader feels like they're being patronized, their not going to like reading the story.

With some revision, I think this could be a very good piece. Even if you don't work on it, it was a nice attempt. _
Lil1 chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
You're so good! All of your stories are way deep! Its like, darkness and hopelessness at the beginning but hope in the end. Let me read the others...*even though I have three chapter tests tomorrow!*
chris spirit chapter 1 . 4/9/2002
Rip off. Write something better than this trash, at least something original.
Rae chapter 1 . 1/11/2002
Nice. I liked it alot. Making friends with the guards and warden couldn't have done much for his comfort all those hours when they weren't within easy reach. I really liked the ending though.
Denise Willis chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
I really liked the idea of rising above your situation. I would have liked to have seen him get out of prison though...well written as usual Jonathon...Deexxx