|Reviews for Beyond the Green Light|
| BecomingMyself chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
"Laugh. Cajole. The mirth She stole."
How beautiful to use these words, to express the feelings of tenderness and gentleness that has stolen...
I don't get the "killing June" part though, but it is clear, that the hurt make you feel like no words will ever be good enough to express the hurt you feel, yet you did a great job.
VERY WELL WRITTEN!
It is mystical and uniquely written, has a very nice rhyming, good flow, soft and tender feel to it.
Yes, you are great writing like this!
| Sunlit Rain chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
A very interesting sort of song-the wording effectively cultivates an aura of mystery. A part of me wishes that the message was a little clearer, but another part already knows that message, so I can only hope the two decide to share information sometime soon. Overall, very well done and I really liked it.
| Asia Marie chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
Ever read the Great Gatsby?
The Green Light allusion reminded me of that...
This is pretty good. I'm gonna look at your other stuff now... heh.