Reviews for Dreaming
acccountkiller chapter 1 . 12/25/2003
Hey! This is so powerful! The last stanza totally blew me away! And I love the phrase 'Because dreaming is believing ' so sweet! a gorgeous poem! You have to write more, your stuff rocks! Love, Mia
Suirenhe chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
this is a lovely poem that taps into the heart. You're really good.
godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 11/8/2003

such a lovely, lovely, heart-wrenchingly beautiful poem. I thought it was just a very sweet, well-written love poem...and then that last stanza...ah. so wistful and powerful.
SpawnMeister666 chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
Okay, thats one pretty powerful dream!

Its also one that I think pretty much all of us have, or something similar to it anyway, at some point in time.

I like it a lot, very easy to relate to.

Great stuff

Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
The details were so sweet and passionate.

~Heart of the Sword
Winter's Roar chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
Oh, so sad, such a beautiful peaceful picture was created, i'm saddened to know it wasn't real. Oh well, the ending was extremely creative and pure brilliance! Never lose your fantastic spark! Hope to see more up from you soon!

~ winter
Anthony Draconius chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
I often wonder why you do not submit your poems to a publisher. I guess I will have to ask you sometime. Please continue with writing because you have an amazing talent and keep whatever or whoever is giving you this inspiration.
schande chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
JUST "WOW!" I love it o