Both of the characters in the story are kind of annoying. The Mike guy is so uh.. But this story had me wanting to kow what happened next.

Took him long enough to tell her how he felt. I think the man at the funeral was his father. Anyway I have to say that your writting improved a lot throughout the course of the story and that the character that I like the most was MATT.

This story is very frustrating! I don't like Shannon and Mike. She's always saying she's not a kid, but all she does is complain and cry, this is very annoying. Now Mike is annoying as well, if he doesn't want to be with her (as he says)then why he doesn't leave her alone and stop torturing.

So far this is very confusing, but I will continue reading it.

Hi. Your story is so beautiful end. I wonder who is that man at funeral? Is he the father of Mike? Or uncle? I feel sorry for Mike's loss of his mother. I am so happily that Mike finally tell Shannon how he felt about her. I glad Shannon understand him because she made him happily and safe. :) Keep writing. Hope to look forward to your next story. Hope its Darren's story. Can't wait for it. :D

Wow. this story was gud. the beginng knda ha dme in doubt but im glad i conitnud. ]

i really luv this story!

so i'm not sure if this story is over or not. at first, i loved the story. i've been reading it for 5 years now... and it feels like you took longer than i would have liked, to finish the story.

i just finished it now... wondering if you just didn't want to bother writing more chapters, or felt horrid for making most of us wait so long.

i'll leave you with that.

it was a nice story though.

hmm, interesting. cya later ~ Alenor.

is that the last chapter? or is there more update already its been like 2 months

wow, mike just left her high and dry huh? well update i wanna see if his sorry butt comes back begging for her. I want to see him more vunerable, he's always strong and he needs to finally break down and come crawling back to Shannon. And shannon should not forgive and make him work hard for him to get back in her good graces. That would be really interesting..

update man...please...dude it's been like a month or more...

omg this story is amazing! i can't wait to see what happens update please!

that is so sad... update the story! i want to know what happens! i hope mike comes after her... and takes her away from her awful ungrateful aunt.

update soon!

omg please don't let that be the ending! you have to update soon! you just left all you're readers on a major cliffhanger. I can't believe Shannon is actually leaving i thought that something would happen at the last moment and she would end up staying. I can't believe Mike is acting like that. I mean i can understand where he is coming from but i still think that he is kind of an asshole. I mean he never really told her he really liked her or anything he just said that he wouldn't mess up her life. He just thinks he's a bad influence on her. And i hate how Darren/Mike/Izzy/Her friends didn't even throw a suprise going away party for her that's just terrible. Mike is just so wishy-washy to me, sometimes I think that he really likes Shaz but sometimes I think he's just playing her. I can't really read him that well and that's kind of weird because i'm usually good at this kind of stuff. And aww Matt approves of them two how cute. But yeah sorry about my rambling i go off on tangents a lot. I hope that Shannon lives in Aunt Judy's prissy lifestyle for sometime and then she moves out on her own and Mike and Darren come to visit her and see how much she's grown or something. That would be awesome. I hope you further continue the story because i really really would like you to write about 38093485340558349805 more chapters lol.

-sara

KEEP ON WRITING!