Reviews for Gang protection
Carina chapter 4 . 11/19/2003
It was a bit confusing who's prospective it was at first and also the band thing just seemed to come out of no where.
ck chapter 4 . 11/19/2003
So she got in the band. Are the band members friends of Darren? I can't wait to see their reactions. Please update as soon as you can. Thanks.
ck chapter 3 . 11/17/2003
I liked the chapter. So she is goin to try out. I can't wait to see what is goint to happen. Update as soon as you can. Thanks.
Carina chapter 3 . 11/17/2003
You should make your chapters longer.
terra-bookie chapter 2 . 11/10/2003
well, it's interestin so far. i hope you continue with your story. please update soon.
ck chapter 2 . 11/10/2003
I liked the chapter. So she doesn't have a family. I can't wait to find out what happened to her. Update as soon as possible. Thanks.
innocent lil devil chapter 2 . 11/10/2003
hey i like the way it started, this sounds like its gonna be really interesting. update soon!

Carina chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
Hey this story sounds interesting. Very mysterious this Mike. I really hope you continue it.
ck chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
This seems interesting. I can't wait to see what happens as you write more chapters to this story. Update as quickly as you can. Thanks.
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