It was a bit confusing who's prospective it was at first and also the band thing just seemed to come out of no where.

So she got in the band. Are the band members friends of Darren? I can't wait to see their reactions. Please update as soon as you can. Thanks.

I liked the chapter. So she is goin to try out. I can't wait to see what is goint to happen. Update as soon as you can. Thanks.

You should make your chapters longer.

well, it's interestin so far. i hope you continue with your story. please update soon.

I liked the chapter. So she doesn't have a family. I can't wait to find out what happened to her. Update as soon as possible. Thanks.

hey i like the way it started, this sounds like its gonna be really interesting. update soon!

~mandi~

Hey this story sounds interesting. Very mysterious this Mike. I really hope you continue it.

This seems interesting. I can't wait to see what happens as you write more chapters to this story. Update as quickly as you can. Thanks.