Reviews for The Black Knight
giveGodtheglory chapter 2 . 7/28/2005
"Crushing snakes in her name." That's cute. So is Nathan's last line.

Sorry I'm not leaving a great review like you did, but I'm distracted.

God bless!
mnnkey chapter 2 . 1/16/2005
so, wait, the dude in the first chapter is Nathan and the baby is Danielle? WRITE MORE. NOW. ASAP. IMMEDIATELY. I need to know more! Just do it. thank you. : - D
Artemis Darkclaw chapter 2 . 11/21/2004
great story, I can't wait to read more. But in paragraph 9 it should be Darvin's soldiers not shoulders.
Eddie Wright chapter 2 . 10/18/2004
Oh, sorry, I didn't notice this second chapter.
It isn't fair really, is it? I mean, everywhere gets burned down! Just curious, is this meant to be on earth, or somewhere else?
Tinder's a nice name for a horse.
Eddie Wright chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
Going to write some more soon? Hope so.
monkey chapter 1 . 3/28/2004
ok, this is one kind of cliffhanger I don't like. Write more. ASAP. Cuz I said so.
katie barrie chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
sounds cool
SumiFritzN chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
I agree with the other reviewer. This would make for a really good story. Is that what you're planning on doing? You really should. It's really sad sounding. But still, like always, well written.
Rusalka chapter 1 . 11/17/2003
Thats kind of sad, the fire destroyed everything. Well written, I think it would make for a good story too.