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Reviews for
Sheathen
IHJ
chapter 1 .
11/4/2003
Nice mocking overtone. I like the line about her looking like a dragon and tasting like "sweet surreal poison". REALLY nice. The black widow/web idea is somewhat over-used, but overall, it's a good poem.
Izzy J.