Reviews for To Send Thee Out Of Door
eldrin chapter 23 . 6/15/2005
Loved this! Absolutely.

Your writing is beautiful and I sincerly hope that I have the opportunity to read more of your poetry soon.
eldrin chapter 21 . 6/14/2005
My blue eyes are dancing in delight! Lovely.

Ha, I don't do very good vith physics either, I stick to the whole english/ history thing. I liked the poem, not your best, but since it's humorous nature doesn't allow for the deep connections of other types of writing I shall not complain_
eldrin chapter 19 . 6/14/2005
Absolutely wonderful! I have to say, I love the Christian influence in most (if not all) of your poetry, it really presents a sense of closeness, and, well, you do an excellent job of making your words feel real.

'The Secret's Out' was simply sweet, I loved it. My favorite of the past few was definately 'Jay Gatsby', the style is a little different from your other writing, but that makes it stand out in a good way. There is heartbreak, and all the words work together in a manner to make me marvel.
eldrin chapter 15 . 6/14/2005
I think that these are three of the best I've read on this site. All of them have...a beauty that opens, and draws the reader close, enveloping and refreshing.

Life's Secrets: W-o-w. This one uses natural rhythms and bandys words to an extent that makes me want to read it over and over.

The Music: Simple, short, but cutting right down to a point that suits it's musical qualities.

Petal: Seems almost a random placing of words, but by the time you reach the end you see a troubled connection. It was weird, but this one inspired a sort of peace in me.
eldrin chapter 12 . 6/13/2005
Such power and emotion that comes through 'Waiting'! This one is a superb piece of writing.

'Roses are Red' starts slow but picks up, I like the last stanza and how the classic lines are brought in.

The other two poems were good as well, but slightly missing some of the life in your other work.
eldrin chapter 8 . 6/12/2005
'Scene' was marvolous. Much Ado About Nothing is one of my favorites and I find you write an exceptional portrayal of Hero.

I found this song rather impressive in parts but overall a little lacking of perfection.

I'll certainly continue to read when I can.
eldrin chapter 5 . 6/12/2005
These first four poems are lovely. My favorite was 'Dance' but I greatly enjoyed the haunting tones of 'Dear Friend'. Your poetry very smoothly pulls the reader in and keeps words pulling until I don't think I quite wish to let go.
Special Chris chapter 12 . 6/8/2004
Is this about the same guy in Chist bearer? They had me on the verge of tears. I hope it ended happy.
Special Chris chapter 4 . 6/8/2004
This poem is so good! I'm not even one who really reads poetry, but this was really good! Plus, I hear you are cute. I may be in love with you. Well, this is how the great poet Elizabeth Browning met her husband, through her poetry.