Reviews for Slipping Away
NurseDelilah chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
...okay i have to admit that was really good. I really like ur description "Phantom glimpses

Of pale gold dancing

Tuneless songs in foreign tongues

While fairies smile from gilded bounds

Quietly slipping away" i's just really moving somehow? hmm...sorry for the other stuff 2. I like ur poems. And since ur more mature and er older then me i guess u have a a right to critisie my young brain?