|Reviews for Forsaken Souls|
| Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 12/31/2003
i love it. The wording and vocabulary are so powerful. You used such gorgeous and rich language. Very good. Also, very visual. I loved it. I look forward to reading moer of your work.
| TheRainbowScentedPlatypus chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
strong images and emotion. this piece has really good description in it. keep writing!