|Reviews for Meadows|
| rose chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
-i like all the metaphors and the grassy person is very funny! lol! ) nice job here! i can see u used a lot of effort here!
| Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
I apologize if I made you feel down about yourself - I am only being honest with you. I think honesty is much better than being lied to.
I am glad to see that you are doing better. )
"quit" should be "quiet".
The line "only a place where I can only find my true grassy self." made me chuckle a little, because it immediately brought the image of a person made of grass to my head...and that's a pretty funny image. ;
"The philosophy of love" is a good line.
The ending is good, too.
| Emi Amara chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
hiya! this is a nice poem, with good imagery! good idea! just wondering- is the second line down meant to be 'quiet meadow'?