Reviews for A Promise
rose chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
it's one of those truths poem about the real truth about luv. i like the ending of how optimistic u are.
Pose For Me chapter 1 . 11/14/2003
I love it! It reminds of a few of my poems combined, the feelings/ tones and such. I like it mucho much! Write more poems like these.
Emi Amara chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
hiya! i have a poem called promise! on a different subject though. well done! i like this too. especially the verse with the lightening bolt, good idea for comparison. great choice of words!

cya )