|Reviews for Deception from reality|
| Ian chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
ME TRUE, ME VERY VERY TRUE. great poem, i like it, but...i feel that you think I am lyeing. : P oh well, I am not, and I know that, you should know it to! This was a great poem though
| sophs99919 chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
hey! thanx for the review on lil mothy... soz i am a vegetarian too lol. anyways
thisd poem is really nice cuz it's like... i want to love you but i'm not sure if i cacn trust you! really deep in a way... sorry i don't have any suggestions for a title.
| The intellect chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
i think deception of reality wud be good for this poem, but im wierd so ignore me lol.
short but sweet
| LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
Hey! Awsome poem! I totally loved it dude! I think "Real Or Fake?" is a ok title... I don't know, I can't decide a title for u (lol) But it is ba good poem, so keep working hard! Peace OuT!
| EternalBlackRose-85 chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
Very, very nice. I liked the flow. One thing though: 'hoe' should be 'how' in the last line ;). As for a title, what about "Hesitation" or "Questioning"... just my two cents there, anywaym loved the poem.