Reviews for When Shadows Fall
Jamie-Face chapter 1 . 2/7/2004
I've read quite a few of your poems, and I love them all. Sometimes your writing is so simple, but it's so beautiful. I wish I could write like you do, honestly, I'm jealous!
**candi**
Werewolf Nighteyes chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
No! I don't wanna kick you! (laughs) I like this! Darn it ,you're a very talented poet. I wish I could write half as well as you could...
Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
sorry, I haven't reviewed in so long since I've been very busy with all sorts of things. Anyways, this is A VERY GOOD POEM! I love the rhyme and now I'm a little creeped out... (*looks cautiously over her shoulder*)... Great job!

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
Asaria Blake chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
Wow this is cool. I like it.
deepdown chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
the lack of punctuation in this one is very effective, and the way it is all long and thin is sort of... mah, i dunno. but a bloody good ending, especially with no full stop or anything. it finishes itself without any need for that, and yet at the same time leaves it hanging. Bravo! another wonderful piece of poetry.
DefianceIsMe chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
I like the innate rhythm in this...great job. It's a powerful piece. GJ.
NIPH chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
o gnifty! ;D I luv the middle part...yea...O.o *thumbs up*