Reviews for Eye of the Storm
Dame Guenievre chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
It is very nice... It says a lot about people need love, even if at the end, someone is broken is pices but never gets enough of love...
Glassed Rose chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
wow! this was really good. yay! go you! *holds up peace sign* You rock!
Ela-chan chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
I sighed with longing for something I don't know right after I finished that. Precious piece.
nine iron chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
Another good poem, nice original ending path.
Nine Iron
Blackout the Swordsman chapter 1 . 3/23/2004
I know what you mean. This poem sums up the deeper side of love pretty accurately.
bach-player chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
good subject, however the last line, in my opinion, did not maintain the driving intensity of the rest of the poem. consider revising.
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
wonderful! you are so incredible! i love your poems!
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
I like the final lines, really god emotion! I find that this poem could be a chapter of the last one.
gemk96 chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
very good poem. i would of liked a diff. ending, a stronger one, the whole poem is very powerful, ending sounds kind of weak, ending let me down,
EndlessLove4u chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
I liked it a lot, I think it is really deep and sentimental. Great work!