**light bulb lights up in my red mop of a head** Well, now...Good poem, I must say. Disturbing? Yes, but wonderfully so. We all need something of a distraction to bring us away from the "flawlessness" of the perfection of today. In no way did it disgust me, for I read this lot muchly. And, as an author, I agrees that this lovely little box is...well, quite a lovely box, no?

Okay, okay, I've been convinced to write in the box, but not because you asked, but cause your poem was good! I even happen to be one of those Christians that you warned away, but I love stuff like this, and I absolutely completly understand it.

This is kinda like the stories I write for English class...It's good (Have you been tapping into my mind while I sleep? (kidding, you're a good enough wrtier you don;t need to, and you'd probably pick someone good to rip off if you had to(not that you would(how may parenthaseses can I get into here?).).).).

A beautiful epic. It catches the spare between doubts, fills them with our nightmares and dares us to push ourselves over the edge - to surrender, to never forgive, to die but still live, to commit suicide even.

It is not disturbing, and if it sets out to shock, it fails. It does however make you feel uneasy; it spawns doubt, breeds contempt for your own self-assurance and paints the world in darker shadows.

Very subtle stuff which addresses virtually everything wrong. Bit need it be so bleak? Big hugs.

Was I supposed to get that? Well, I have a reputation for being a bit slow...but I'm not QUITE as thick as I'm made out to be!

Oh man...I get this...Now what does that say about me? Oh well...

Umm... interesting. _ I don't understand why a Christian shouldn't read this (at least, I didn't find anything too bad in here). I was curious as to how "disgusting" this supposedly was, and to be honest, I didn't think it was so bad. I can actually empathize, too. Though my voices just tell me how stupid I'm acting. _;; Anyway, you're a really good writer. You use lots of emotions in your writing; I like that. Keep up the good work!

Hmm, I don't usually read poetry (in fact I never have up to this point..), but I really liked this. Sure it was a tad disturbing, sure it was a tad strange, but I still liked it a h*ll of a lot. Has a really nice sound to it (hmm, I don't mean to say its all happy and fluffy or whatever, I just mean it sounds good!), and I like it. Good work.

i'm being a responisble reader and writing a review. D its not that bad...not as disturbing as i thought...pretty good...i gess...

I dunno if I got the meaning...but you're a *really* good poet.

Ya know, I've read this a couple times now, and it's not AS twisted now. But I still love it.

I'm adding you and this story to my list of favorites. I really enjoyed it and found it to be very profound.

Whoa-ho, dude. That was totally morbid. I like morbid. You rock. Right on, man.

This poem was slightly disturbing, but I understand why. You have a way of frightingly showing where the true evil in people resides: in the mind. Screw anyone that says you are messed up or something. Maybe you only did this for a shock affect (I don't know) but I definitely think it says something about the darkness of the human mind. Thanks for your writing. Bye all! ;P

You're twisted... I love you! (Don't take that the wrong way) The light bulb went off and I'm glad it did.