Reviews for Standing On This Bridge
myno chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
hey, you should seriously consider being a songwriter! cool poem, strong emotions and all that... Set this to music and you'd have a really cool song!
Inoperative chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
man, you'll never be alone, ok - you got me right here.

absolutely brilliant poem, powerful, emotion behind each and every word... you painted a marvellous picture, wordpainter :D

dude - love you
Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 11/7/2003
Oh... oh wow.. this took my breath away... it's just so.. perfect. every single line is amazing..incredible job.. i love that line, "Intimate is suicide, blood is pleasure in despair"... it's all so dark and depressing and wonderfully written and I am impressed. Awesome job.
God's daughter chapter 1 . 11/7/2003
it sounds like a song n it's so sad...i like it tells me a story. touching...cheq out my poems plz. 1

"God bless u!"