Reviews for Another Small Crack
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
Sad. The rhyming felt natural. I like it.
Glassed Rose chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
*cries* that was so sad! but, its was really good! I will be your #1 fan! yeah! go me! go you!
Mormon Princess 1 chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
This is really good!
Ela-chan chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
I shall hug the poem, and the poem will be hugged. Beautiful.
Blackout the Swordsman chapter 1 . 3/23/2004
Again, I can relate. Looks like you have experienced love more than once. Brief, but the message is still very clear.
karla chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
I read it again, b/c i liked it a lot and i decided: ur crazy for thinking something like that!
bach-player chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
i like it...i would tighten it up even more than you have...something like this...
lie to me again. pretend to be mine
False adoration, like the last time
all those lies, so easily spoken
another crack in a heart already broken
hope you don't mind the suggestion...all the best...
Morbane chapter 1 . 12/21/2003
Short but very hard-hitting.
gemk96 chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
perfect length, very good. would never agree to what they are asking for, but i do agree it's very good.
EndlessLove4u chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
Awesome girl!
Sheeba chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
You know I love this poem. It's short, but so powerful. In so few words, you expressed so many feelings. Awesome. :)