Reviews for She
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
What else can be said about a woman! m
heterochromia chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
A beautiful haiku.
hamsta-gurl
IHJ chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
Still haven't gotten down the 5-7-5 structure of a haiku down...

Simplistic, and sweet poem.

Izzy J.
Silent Scars chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
It's a cute poem, but have to understand that for it to be a haiku, it has to have 5 syllables on the first line, then 7 and lastly 5 again. Good work overall; keep writing.
Ellerfru chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
If this is a haiku, then why isn't it in the haiku section? Anyway, good poem. :)