Reviews for The Legacy
IHJ chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Hm...Kinda gotta agree with Paganicewand here. It's a bit awkward, with that quite lengthy line.

Glad you wrote a poem for our former Prime Minister. I'm not really knowledgeable in politics and all, but does seem kinda weird to not have him as our P.M. anymore.

Malaysia Boleh!

Izzy J.
justanotherdeadaccount chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
Yes I know...it's so sad he left the chair! What a great president he was...

I'm kinda scared for Malaysia now...but MALAYSIA BOLEH..right?

Maybe you should make your poems longer...instead of one stanza.

Where you wrote:

'In my heart, your words, your visions and your lessons,'

You should have broken it down to add effect:

'Are In my heart,

your words, your visions

and your lessons,'

Other than that...pretty good.