|Reviews for The Dream|
| cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
Wow, that was great. The topic of dreams is one I am fascinated with, yet I always find it hard to explain their true beauty. And here, you have done just that in 15 words. Excellent, I loved this, keep writing :)
| Tatterdemalion chapter 1 . 11/17/2003
Wow. Very nice. I like a bit of rhyme you included, and I totally identify with your sentiment. :)
I've just one question. Aren't haikus usually short-long-short or 5-7-5? I thought they were, but your piece doesn’t follow that pattern. Are you just using a variant I haven't heard of before, or is it something else?
| Fred Bob chapter 1 . 11/14/2003
Wonderful, keep up the good work.
| Emi Amara chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
Hi! this is really good! Beautifully written, well done!
| Ellerfru chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
beautiful :) and very true.
| Zainab chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
Wow that was beautiful!