Reviews for Betrayal of feelings
Hp-Princess23 chapter 2 . 5/22/2005
Aw, that's so sad. Once again, I know exactly how she feels- I felt the same way when I found out my teacher had a girlfriend! I really identified with the girl
Leo of Love chapter 2 . 12/8/2003
I had exactly the same thought as 'black' it really suggests that you have something for your teacher. And to put it another way, this means it's a great poem. Able to pull the heartstrings of readers. I can imagine the whole situation so vividly, that anyone would really think that this work is rather personal. But great work!
Anyway, I suppose you should know who I am. And my way of reviewing poems, is not to look at technique, but rather the emotions. I believe that with genuine outpour of feelings, it'll be a great poem. Nicholas Sparks once said through a character in his book that poems aren't meant to be analysed, but to inspire without reason. (note:these are not the exact quotes.)
black chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
aww, cool story! *sniff* kinda sad though, haha, keep up the good work! hmm, are ya feeling somethin' for your teacher girl? haha