|Reviews for last night|
| Charity F chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
I especially like the soft warm sounds in "warm" and "gone".
To me it seems a bit superfluous and I find myself not entirely understanding your gist.
Maybe you could have extended this into something longer with more depth, so that you could explore these ideas further?
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Beautiful; you make angst just as addictive as love.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
beautiful.. I love the red thing.. nice job
| Morwain chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
red rain is warm-i can taste that
ahh, i say that too much
do you know if you review too much you start having a review book of what your mind knows to say
for example:"ah, interestingi really like the taste in this piece"
(so i was looking at the things i cant ask you
are you gaga?
that made me laugh
and i am way too off topic for myself sometimes. i apologize)
| zz00 chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Cool. Sounds like a sexual relationship where one party has deeper feelings that the other party has no idea of. I dunno tho, maybe I'm just crazy. And thanks for the many reviews, and, I'll let you in on a little secret: As much as I can write in French, I make a million and one mistakes just speaking casually, since, it's my second language. And I'm jealous that you speak German (and btw you speak English better than most English people do, so be proud!) Because, I'm part German (I'm part everything!), and I've always wanted to be able to speak German. :)
| Kusje chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
I like your style and how you write your poems.
Snipped, Cutt and Pasted sweetly.
I loved it.
You also like Japanese? I do too. :DHajimemashite!
| theory of black chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
oh crazy! i like the imagry. good job.
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
this is really well written, short, to the point, accurate. good analogies too. keep going!
| doska chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
Ein sehr schönes Gedicht. Es stimmt einen nachdenklich!
| Ed Girl chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
wow i have nothing to say to praise this
lol i humbly bow to u
| Bob n Kazzi chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
I'm guessing the three meanings of "last" are - and don't hit me if I am wrong -
Last Night - as in the previous night
Last Night - as in the last ever night
Last Night - as in "go on forever" night
Am I right?
I loved this, honestly!
| FAKEromances chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
| hurtmushroom chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
WOW. mysteriös! Die Sache mit dem "last" ist einfach genial - das Gedicht an sich auch. Faszinierend. Würd schon sagen, dass es um Liebe - oder eine Form davon - geht...
| MistrissD chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
So dark and so beautiful