|Reviews for Band of Heroes, Inc|
| BelieveInTheUnbelievable1 chapter 17 . 5/27/2014
YOU'RE GOING DOWN, BUSTER! 3 3
| Beautifully Corrupted chapter 3 . 9/22/2012
Love it so funny and adorable :D
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
| sarcasm is my middle name chapter 17 . 9/22/2010
Get the effect you're going for, it's really funny!
| MoManiac chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
i don't mean to be rude or anything, but i honestly couldn't read this story. it was all random and chaotic and there's random authors notes everywhere. i guess all the randomness is okay for a lot of people, but i at least think you should stop with the author's notes, or at least just star (*) things and write the note at the bottom of the page. it REALLY takes away from the story.
| Brittanie chapter 10 . 8/4/2009
You write the most dysfunctional stories I have ever read and they're completely hilarious! Kudos!
| anon.1993 chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
i really like your description of Ren. purple eyes are awesome!
cant wait to read more.
p.s.- i like your taste in books :p
| KatyaChekov chapter 5 . 11/3/2008
I liked the old lady dying. XD That was just too perfect. One complaint, though...you don't need to keep describing hair color and such. Readers know what the characters look like, so repeating descriptions can get annoying, especially in shorter stories. The elf lady's description, spread out as it was, was good.
Like the story so far. It helps relieve the boredom of a school day, and is a good story to boot.
| Elle Winters 9 chapter 17 . 10/18/2008
Yeah, it was a abrupt and didn't seem to suit, but it was dragging on for awhile.
anyway it was funny )
| Elle Winters 9 chapter 3 . 10/18/2008
i think you should be a song writer. i was sorely disappointed when i tried to find the song on google. miserable failure.
| Elle Winters 9 chapter 2 . 10/18/2008
HAHHAHAHAHA a genius that she is.
| a beginner chapter 17 . 7/4/2008
i Really Honestly, truely, without doubt like it...
| FreeDaChickens chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
This looks interesting, but Ren is really a Mary Sue. Her beauty, generous figure, knee length silver hair, and purple eyes contribute to this. To make her less of a Mary Sue, her eyes should probably be an actual color (when have you ever seen purple eyes?), and her hair should be a realistic color and length (silver "straight, knee-length locks"?)
In addition, you should never, ever interrupt your story with an author's note ("large purple eyes narrowed in a ferocious scowl. (a/n: yes, I'm obsessed with purple eyes. grins hehehe)"). It's great that you love purple eyes. You can tell everyone that at the end of your chapter. But please, don't interrupt your story to give the readers your personal opinion on the character!
I think there's a lot of potential in this story, but you should try making Eirena less of a Mary Sue.
| atreyu love chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
haha, it seems interesting :D
| Angel of the Fallen chapter 17 . 6/2/2007
i liked it alot! Ren's very funny and i think her and Varien make a great although hillariously funny couple!