strong emotions felt throughout the poem...good pace...

this poem is so awsome and so rhythematic i love it!
may i suggest reading one of my poems

Aww sad , but written awesome just the same , thanks for the review ;)

It's so sweet and sad and full of emotion. I really like it. It's got competition with The End of the Line! (I'm obsessed with The Offspring) Sunrise

a beautiful poem that captured my thoughts.

sweet, short, smiple, and to the point! its awesome! i realli like these poems! to my favie listie poem!

I can completely relate to this poem, having lost someone recently myself. Captured the feeling completely...

Oh very sad, like much of your poems. Very good.
AC

True, no one can unravel that mystery. Just yesterday I received a message that somebody I knew die i dnt knw him that well but still you wonder... why do people have to die? Nice poem.

That was exactly how I felt, no... how I still feel sometimes about my dad. Sometimes I wonder why things have to happen the way they did, and question God for his sanity for taking such a good man from this world. No answers were given, and none will be. The only way you'll ever get over the pain of lost is to overcome it with the pleasures and joys you recall. A person has two certain things in their lives, planned out and predictable. They are to be born, and to die sometime after. Life is unmeasured, you never know when things will happen, and when it'll all end...