Reviews for Why?
crazilazigurl chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
strong emotions felt throughout the poem...good pace...
DHABUZ chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
this poem is so awsome and so rhythematic i love it!
may i suggest reading one of my poems
HoldinOn2Him chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
Aww sad , but written awesome just the same , thanks for the review ;)
Love and Destroy chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
It's so sweet and sad and full of emotion. I really like it. It's got competition with The End of the Line! (I'm obsessed with The Offspring) Sunrise
whitesmoke chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
a beautiful poem that captured my thoughts.
sketchmedesire chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
sweet, short, smiple, and to the point! its awesome! i realli like these poems! to my favie listie poem!
Silver Phoenix Falling chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
I can completely relate to this poem, having lost someone recently myself. Captured the feeling completely...
flowerthief chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
Oh very sad, like much of your poems. Very good.
Whitesiren chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
True, no one can unravel that mystery. Just yesterday I received a message that somebody I knew die i dnt knw him that well but still you wonder... why do people have to die? Nice poem.
demolished chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
That was exactly how I felt, no... how I still feel sometimes about my dad. Sometimes I wonder why things have to happen the way they did, and question God for his sanity for taking such a good man from this world. No answers were given, and none will be. The only way you'll ever get over the pain of lost is to overcome it with the pleasures and joys you recall. A person has two certain things in their lives, planned out and predictable. They are to be born, and to die sometime after. Life is unmeasured, you never know when things will happen, and when it'll all end...