Reviews for HalfTruths
All4Myself chapter 1 . 12/31/2003
wow! Intersting, its so true though. I love it
Danielle
htmraw chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
Great poem! Very subtle.
Seth does refer to Osiris and Seth (Although I didn't know it at the time)
Keep up the great work!
Trapped-Bird chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
Amazing...once again...Oh about your story "Forever on my hands", can i put it in my buddyprofile, if i give you full credit?
Infinity04 chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
Onions can never be unpeeled

To reveal their cores without making you cry.

wow. awesome lines. Dude, you're insane! lol! thanks for the crazy comments, it's cool... Dude where's my car is funny. But I'm crazy about Bill/Ted. They're such cute morons! _ I LOVE THAT LINE FROM DUDE WHERE'S MY CAR! LOL! (the red barn thing)

"I mean, we fellow authors need to get together to send you back in time so that you can get a better grade in these classes, because ...

but then we wouldn't have this poem."

You're so funny! lol! Thanks so much for the reviews...

This poem is the stuff that makes me cry, it's so sad and depressing, but I like it.

Sick and tired, tired and true, true and false. those are some killer lines!

"all we are, is dust in the wind, dude!"

Later! _
Roadside Dryer chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
Great poem. I really like it. This poem is very powerful. Not the words but the way you read it and catch just little pieces brings the best out in it! Great, it's awesome.
Demosthenes-C chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
wow, alot of feeling. its very good...it was awesome. this is goin gunder my favorite stories. keep up the good writing
pammifrog chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
that was awesome. i don't know what else to say. i loved it.. i lived it...