|Reviews for After All|
| K. Molle chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
wow that would make an amazing song
| anjil chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
You and your friend seem to have written sister poems. Interesting ...
| Fluffyfledgling chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Chilling. "Come to Me in Dreams" is still my fave though. Anyways, yet again, I love your poem/story style. Very beautiful.
| octobertears chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
Ah, Val, you have done it again. Made me really think and really try to understand.
Like all your writing, this is very good. I will patiently wait for more.
| NeWriter chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
It's pretty depressive stuff. Apart from the layout and some capitals, I don't see anything wrong with it. You managed to handle descriptions very well and let the reader have an insight of what the person was feeling. I wonder if you wrote this in some kind of inspiration or if you wrote it because you wanted to release some pain. Either way, it worked really good.
| Mal chapter 1 . 11/17/2003
| faith chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
Creepy. Very good, but creepy.
| attemptingwriter chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
that was awesome! really beautiful, nice job