yikes! well written, had me wondering how you were gonna end this.
~Mack

whoa! i loved the description at the beginning, it was done so well! and the idea for the story is ace, very heavy _poor Ella, its good how you make people sympathise with her even though she killed someone, bless her.

ohh...I love this one too!

I love your descriptions. Makes everything come alive in technicolour before your eyes (which isn't a pleasent thing...) ;o) Is this the start of something? It's really good but it leaves a few questions like where is the room? Who are these people? And why did she kill him?
You do have a great turn of phrase though. Keep up the good work!

Well that was...cheerful lol.
No, this was very good; great descriptions. Keep writing!
PS Thanks for reviewing my story

Hey chick! :D You followed me here! That's so cool.. :D ANyway, this was...gory. But why did she kill him?

Abbie