|Reviews for Death's Melody|
| acccountkiller chapter 1 . 11/14/2003
Hey! Wow...thought I should check this out...wow...very really, the imagery is amazing. Gorgeous..i'm no critic so I couldn't give you any 'constructive criticism' even if there was some to give, good work. Keep writing! Love and good luck, Mia
| light of middle earth chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Hm very clever. I like this a lot (permission to put it on my wall?) free yourself from death etc. Only lines three and four with the rhyme and perhaps add away to "purge my sin" too help it fit with the previous line... but that is being highly critical.. apart from that i love this, well done,
| William Ironclad chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
Cool. Very good. I like it a lot.
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
| Ian chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
This is absolutly brillent, we should lock you in a room and watch you to see where is comes from,lol. GR i got in a lot o trouble at school, so I wont be able to review for a while, but dont worry, when I get back I already have 7 new poems I need to post. : )
| Prophecy Puppet chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
Another one for mai favorites! This is great, perfect word choices and a ryhme scheme too!
Can I borrow some of your talent?
Oh, maybe you'd like to check the last line, however...
| Ellerfru chapter 1 . 11/9/2003