Reviews for Montana Dating Game
FLIPPER66 chapter 3 . 2/14/2013
very good start to a complex story line. hope more is on the way.
I you could read some of mine a well id appreciate it. may I suggest the one
called "nice guy rejected again"
Finger Dingbat chapter 3 . 2/9/2005
WHOTT!i really like it, but what all this bout him sneeking kissz hum...just as a not for further notice, maybe you should make the girl he picks a little less ovbious, and maybe make all the girls more even, like he really has to work hard to get an idea of what he wants... lol, oh well, it's really good!
heavengurl899 chapter 3 . 11/24/2003
Erm...I can't say you have gotten better...sorry...your story is just way to predictable...this sort of cliche story has happened numerous times and people want more (what's the word) exciting stories. I am not flaming you...just to remind...this is just connstructive criticizm (hahahaha look at me I can't even spell that word!). If you want more readers I suggest you start to tighten up the story. But keep on going!
JazzeeT chapter 3 . 11/22/2003
i like dawne.. cool story update soon
Little Mermaid chapter 3 . 11/22/2003
o busted! i think he should learn to control himself. but i dont care if he doesnt. he's too adorable and way too much funn

update asap
kristina toffland chapter 3 . 11/22/2003
Wow, great story! keep up the awesome job! update soon and please review my work! lataz, Kris
heavengurl899 chapter 2 . 11/12/2003
hey erm...this is getting better, just to point out something we know that Cameron is going to pick Dawne,

she is




Well mannered


and is obviously smart

both of the other girls are

dark haired

OK in looks

diffrent in weights

ill mannered

heavengurl899 chapter 2 . 11/12/2003
erm...yes of course it's getting there, we already know that Cameron is going to pick Dawne it's very obvious, she's blonde, pretty, shy and well mannered, whilst the rest are dark haired and very far it's OK
heavengurl899 chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
hey...erm interesting start for a story... keep on writing we'll see where is goes from here, why dont you write on instead of ? just wondering, oh well i know how hard it is to take care of those horses though.