Reviews for Return to the Past
Glassed Rose chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
yeah, we all feel that way sometimes... I agree *nods* really really really agree... yeah, but who am I to say. I'm 14, dont know anything. but owell. I hope theses reviews arn't making you mad... please dont be mad, I just want to tell you how good you are...
Ela-chan chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
Your endings always make me smile.
Incrys chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
Either that or my stomach would turn in some cases...I chuckled after that last line )
Blackout the Swordsman chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
M, langorously. I learned a new word. Interesting how you used the semi-Shakespeareian wording in this poem.
184739038 chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
I just can't help grinning when I read this. And for a lack of better words...great job. :)
gemk96 chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
this poem is great, it has a lot of truth to it. great job
Tatterdemalion chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Nice poem. The last line was particularly cool - I was expecting something a bit cheesy but you gave it a nice twist.
selah chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
If only life DID come with a remote (rewind, fast forward, pause, etc..) that would be QUITE interesting. Nice poem, I really liked the language. : )

keep writing.

selah