|Reviews for All my senses|
| Winged One1 chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
Hehehe...I like the last 2 lines! "While I should be sleeping,
Without feeling a single thing."
Cute, I like it.
| me10 chapter 1 . 11/20/2003
i like it because its really sweet. especially the ending. at first i was sort of confused by what you wer trying 2 do but in the end i got it and it worked really well. yey great work.
| midnight dreams chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
That was enlightening. Really happy. Good job. ) Read mine?
| light of middle earth chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Hm. Yes it is not a poem more of a stream of conciensness really (can't spell that lol) and as such it is really quite good, if you ryhme in your mind it shows a talent there lol. Like the idea of hearing Linkin Park over the noise ;) and the referance to something mundane making you think of soemthing important, know that feeling lol. Quite good, i always write my streams in prose but it works in poetry as well,
| IHJ chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
It is quite unlike the other poems you write, but diversity is always nice. :) It is nice how you use all five sense in this poem. Most poems I read hit one, two or three senses. In fact, I'm starting to congratulate poets for writing poetry that assail more than one sense.
Bah. My reviews too long already.
It's kinda cute and I love that you added Linkin Park. *screaming: They rule!*