Reviews for Existance
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 11/20/2003
How you have reviews on nearly all of you poems I'll never understand, :-). But I'll try to make up for the ones without.

I loved the ending and this part:

"This friendship's bounded

By chains, surrounded"

It was great! I loved the whole poem... I don't know what else to say. the subject material and how you described it was excellent! Keep it up.