|Reviews for I want|
| A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Really good...Love it! Sad ;( anyway, love your work, new and old!
| IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
_ It's so bittersweet and perfect!
| Electra Fairford chapter 1 . 11/30/2003
...I think there's a typo in the third-to-last line
| AVIGON chapter 1 . 11/30/2003
I like how you turned things around in this one... Most of the poems on this subject are from the point of view of the one's that's left behind.
| LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Hey, great poem, I love this one.((but Spring Day is ur best work))lol
I love the repetition of I want, and the way u choose ur words!
I did upgraded my poems, so if u have some free time and interested in checking them out, please do it, cuz I really really do appreciate ur reviews.
Anyway, great work, and keep up ur great great work! I truly have neva seen better poet than u!
| Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
oh... creepy... cool
| Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
This is good i like the repetitiveness (if thats a word) i think its possibly 'i like the repetition! Oh well anyway but i dont get the line 'i want you its ok' surely theres a word missing? 'i want you to be okay' or 'I want you to tell me its okay' I dunno it might just be the way im reading it..
| pippin tomson chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
That's a lovely poem! really emotional, for me atleast. very touching.
| William Ironclad chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
Good. Very nice. I like it.
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