|Reviews for green swrils|
| Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
simple and direct, nice
| Moonjava chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
Nice imagery. I like it.
| Kelpylion chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
*pale* green skies...
(sorry, nitpicky. You seem to have issues with hononyms (like pail/pale.) very few words are spelled exactly the same, so if you just remember the definitions to them, and *proofread* that won't happen.)
Now, for the actual review...powerful. I love the expectant tone of this.
| shinco chapter 1 . 11/14/2003
Cool! Short but powerful! _
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
should the title be green swirls? excellent poem great imagery!
| teh tarik chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
o...very descriptive, gave a nice picture to that one...
| TiEka Koniku chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
::looks into the sky:: it black.. oh well though. it not really a haiku, but i still like it. so pretty. heh. *TI*
| yui-kun chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
makes me think of the cover of a certain fantasy book...
| Lina Inverse chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
You certainly conveyed an ominous feeling!
You have two typos though- in the title you said "green swils" instead of "green swirls" and you said "pail" instead of "pale"