|Reviews for Lets Take a Walk|
| Cindy Moon chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
AWW! This is so sweet! It gives me cavities. lolz j/k. The feelings in this are so real.
-Cindy Moon *)
| silverdream139 chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
Kya! This is yet another devastatingly PRETTY! work. Heheh...I especially like these lines:
"How the snow stays in your hair,
Makes it glitter when you move."
"If you get cold, I'll keep you warm,
I'll hold you close, and won't let go"
He...so pretty. I feel inspired! Mooahahah...XD Pretty work; great imagery. JA!
~Terra-chan aka Pinappuru aka Ari
| BloodRed Roses too lazy to log in ElveNDestiNy chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
nice...loL. for the girl you like again?
That's why I say poets are such liars, and writers really are too. Living in California, have you ever seen it snow here? Maybe in the mountains...
~ BloodRed Roses
| Rhetorics chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
WOW! I love winter.. I worship winter hahah. I wrote the Lamplighter dedicated to winter. Winter's the best season ever. And I'm really excited cuz it's comings oon, yaayy... okay I sound like a freak, giddy schoolgirl...
And I'm starting to wonder, who are all these poems to... *suspicious look* I wo'nt bug yout hough hahah. Nice rhyming scheme, and once again... damn good imagery.
Good job, keep up the good work (gotta say that at the end of everything)