Reviews for The Night Is Young
Delete Name chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
OMG, this is wonderful! The scheme, flow, feeling, structure, and imagery were PERFECT. Have you ever been published before?
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10/10
QueenRemge13 chapter 1 . 1/20/2004
Great poem, as always. Keep up the great work!
QR
rufflesia chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
You were writing this in your English exams! Wow. Oh, did I mention that I like the style you write your poems? If not then you know it. Keep it up! :)
Desert Wrath chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
I love how you described the nighttime! The poem flows real well, too. You obviously have a talent with writing. Keep up the good work!
-Desert Wrath
amethystdawn chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
It's beautiful. _ I like your being descriptive and stuff. It improves the poem a lot.
P.S chapter 5 of Frozen Heart is up. _ Thanks for the review.
Forsakn chapter 1 . 12/20/2003
Whoa. This..rhymes! Not literally, but the words flow very well. Good job, and thanks for the review. :D
Love Me CrayziE chapter 1 . 12/19/2003
hey, in response to your review, i feel like all writing is, is taking your experience and putting it into words, that's why the story wasnt hard for me to tell. thanx for the review tho. i like this poem, it has such a nice rhythm to it, and it paints a really clear picture, i almost feel like i'm there. keep it up!
Grey-eyed-dream-chaser chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
Slightly confusing if you're not used to those kinds of poems, but I've written several like that (none of them posted). I like it. I'll try to r&r at least one of your stories, but right now I have to write a research report.
Blue Ketchup chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
This poem is beautiful. It left me with a warm, fuzzy feeling. I absolutely LOVE your work! You are definately going on my favorite list!
Meioku chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
You are a very good poet, you can make things rhyme and express your thoughts.

Thank you for reviewing my poems too!
pippin tomson chapter 1 . 11/23/2003
I can't describe the feeling this has left withing in me, buit it's such a wonderful feeling, coming from such a wonderful poem! I love this work!
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 11/22/2003
I've done some of my best work in the middle of tests! :-).

I loved these lines:

"Yes, I said, let us go,

To hither, to thither,

To whither one knows,

As far as the great dome abodes."

That paragraph was just beautiful! It flowed so well. Magnificent work!
Rhapsodic Melancholy chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
*pause for a moment of joyous reflection* wow that was really good... Dont take this the wrong way, but i dont think you should add more. I think the poem is perfect as it is. Often, even great poems can grow to tedium if overextended. Please dont let that happen to this one. Your style is very interesting, and your imagery is much better than I myself could ever manage. Kudos.

melancholy

┬┐questions?
desolation and destiny chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
WOW! That is one gorgeous poem! Ah! What beauty... what excelent description! I love it! Write more!