|Reviews for i want to write my life|
| Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
some of that was really excellent. despite the rough format it still managed to flow well, the words mostly fit into a rythm. a little improvement would help, but it is not a bad poem. quite good in fact
| The Cheshire Kitten chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
"Wisest are they who know they do not know." (Socrates)
Then why was school invented lol?
On a serious note now, the idea of the poem is grand. Knowledge is a portal of spiritual expansion, and, as you seem to have understood judging by your poem, some things deserve to be investigated more than others.
| Daemone Angelus chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
Hm. sounds like me a few years ago. you begin to understand eventually that not all things can be understood, only to find a pattern in it all, making you have the need to understand yourself more. but in order to understand yourself, you must first understand what others do.
| Blithe chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
This reminds me of a grand Forte overture in an orchestra piece of music..very frantic and loud and..well I enjoyed it.