Wow. This looks like it will be a great story. You have a great premise. i can't wait to see the next chapters!

Can I just say, "Damn!" That story has such a neat quality, and it simply stunned me! While reading it, I listened to the song "Gravity of Hearts" from Enigma. It fit it perfectly...
I love this story a lot... but girl, UPDATE! If you don't I'll go over there and kick your ass as my Christmas present! ...Joking.. lol. You have to update soon though.. SO STOP READING THIS AND GO! ~
LateraMaiAngel

HOW DID I NOT REVIEW! *slaps self* ouch...
Maru: i'd like to knwo that myself, Blue.
Ravage: -_- i so mean! me no review! *goes to corner*
Sagee: *kicks out* say it was good and then i'll give you an MD.
Lycra: QUIT BEING MEAN TO HER!
All: *cower in fear*
Ravage: GREAT CHAPTER! NEXT ONE PLEASE!

Wow. I thought it was very nicely written, and you should definitely continue. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

~TeYa~

You're POV is unique and refreshing. It really adds to the story, and you're truly an amazing writer. Keep it up. And I await more of this story.