|Reviews for As I sit here pen in hand|
| Just Wolf chapter 1 . 3/27/2004
i have to complement your rhymes - they were very subtle and completmented this poem absolutely wonderfully. i liked the idea, and the names, and the flow in the later stanzas was wonderful. i liked "i can go anywhere, but am not excepted / Paraih am i, outcast of society" very true to life, and sums up a lot of teen angst in just a few sentances. well done.
and thanks for the email. if you wan tto read my story "beyond the blue2, i'd be pleased.