|Reviews for Remnant|
| Ela-chan chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
| starsfade chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
the imagery is great in this one! but i think the end could use a little work. but great job! keep it up!
| Blackout the Swordsman chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
Once again, I like the way you take opposite looks at the same thing, almost making it it's own metaphor.
| karla chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
I really liked the beginning, but the ending it needs work, i think. Regardlessly very good poem.
| axica chapter 1 . 2/19/2004
"The fire faded and I was forced to cry you out drop by drop, tear by tear."-c'est perfection
the writings of a poetic pro
| vers le sud chapter 1 . 12/9/2003
I feel it...wonderful evocation of the emotions. Great language. Keep writing!