Reviews for Humble Plea
Eirien chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
This is truly beautiful. I like it very much and I can relate right now. He really is the only one who will never let us down. I love the sincere, tender, vulnerable tone of this poem.
Btw, I wanted to explain why I've removed you from one of my fave lists. As you might know, I've got two accounts on FP, and on my Eirien account the maximum was reached, but I wanted to add another author, so I decided to remove those authors I had on both accounts from one of them in order to make room for others. But you still remain one of my fave authors, you are still on the list on my Edraith account. Just in case you wondered. ;-)
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
Nice, I'm sure God was smiling down when he read this. I like how you get around the 5-7-5 rule by using "Beg of you to listen to/ this, my humble plea"- creative! Good job!
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Very powerful. I'm not actually a Christian, but I can appreciate how you must have felt. Anyway, wonderfully done! :o)
Jez-Arinn chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
this is one great poem! or great many haikus..
it's very good. and i'm sure that you'll find comfort from God in good time.
God Bless.
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
I'm really starting to like haiku! I used to never read it but I slowly and steadily got further into it. This was excellent! I loved the flow of it! And I love it when people write longer haikus!
I loved the lines:
"Hold me up with mighty hands
When I cannot stand"
And the ending was beautiful also! Great stuff!
Thanks for so many reviews over a short period of time! God bless!
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
Beautiful work. You can really feel the emotional plea in this poem, which makes it all the more powerful and meaningful. I hope that life is better for you now. God bless and keep writing.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
I'm sorry you're going through this. Something similar has happened to me, but I find comfort in knowing that God will never leave us. Beautiful piece.

~Heart of the Sword
Getuie chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
*hugs* I have a feeling that this poem resonates in your spirit even more now than it did the day you wrote it. My prayer is that yours will be lovingly received and returned with an answer that's just filled with grace and glory beyond understanding.

As always an amazing poem... But that's nothing new ;-)

The content struck me so much more than structure ever could... I must admit that this poem resonates recently within me too...

Thanx for putting to words the plea that I could not.
PainKiller chapter 1 . 11/14/2003
I'm so sorry that you're going through a hard time right now. Just know that we all appreciate you, and that I'll be praying for you.

Simply beautiful poem; one of your best for sure. I love the aspect of just crying out to your Father. Amazing work.
Ayx chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
Well written

AnnaSun chapter 1 . 11/13/2003

Wow that was a deep Haiku. I liked it. Please read and review my poems.

Thanks for sharing :)
Star-Gir1 chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Beautiful poem Chikara. :) Hope your life gets better soon. I'll pray for ya! _ God bless! *hugs*