Absolutely Amazing...I can really relate. Wow...I'm in awe! ~Sammie

whoa, this is very written

Wow, really good, really nice, amazing imagry, the end really got me. Very very good. One of my faves of yours.
Val

A sense of finality struck me hard. And I nodded with satisfaction. That's a good thing. _

Wow. I don't really know what to say on this one.

Ahh, I love this one! When reading it, I had this weird feeling inside, as if I knew the emotions. Am I even making sense? I love your work. The rhymes are great and the words you used are great as well. It feels like a poem about betrayal. This is a beautifully done piece.

wow... I love this part "My angel turned into a demon,
Just as Lucifer turned to Satan."
~ Anna ~

I love it. Absolutely love it. How the angel turns into the demon, I love it. And I love the Satan reference. Did I use 'love' too much?

Wow! This is great!