|Reviews for All That Glitters|
| Post Apocalyptic chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
I like it. Ive noticed that you seem to be able to convay such powerful images and such unimaginable pain in such a short span of writting. I have rarly seen this before. Bravo.
| Ela-chan chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
Nice use of Tolkien's quote. Is there a person who inspires you to write such heart wrenching things?
| Blackout the Swordsman chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
A wonderful poem, but I wonder if the second-to-last line couldn't be reworded a little?
| Razor Sharp Kisses chapter 1 . 2/11/2004
This is actually terribly sad. What I got from it is loving someone who turned out to be a bad person or loving someone and having to deal with their death/going away. Yet another great piece from an awesome writer.
| Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
great poem...i wrote one with the exact same title...kind of funny...lol :)
| Lizzybelle Kay chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
i love this...great job!
| Nails For Your Crucifix chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Wow. You turned a cliche and made it into your own. Nice job. I especially like that last lines:
Now, light glistens off of the tears that pour forth from my eyes.
And you are in them, gleaming at me from the inside.