Reviews for The Dance
Ela-chan chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
Fast and collected. Nice balance.
Jennacharm chapter 1 . 4/23/2004
I like the underlying imagery. Because there is that image that when you're in love you're not touching the ground. That one line in the middle is a little too long for the flow of the poem.
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
very beautiful! i love it! great imagery!
mazasuki chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
M, this makes me feel all warm inside! I love the line 'pounding to the ageless rhythm of romance'. So...poetic, hehe. I love this poem! Awesome job.
Blackout the Swordsman chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
I may just be nitpicky, but it looks a little redundant in places. However, it keeps a good pace.
gemk96 chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
it has a good start, but it needs more, that only sounds like the beginning of a romance. i would like it to have a bit more.