|Reviews for One|
| Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
well, i thought this piece was quite thoughtful and sweet, the descriptions reminded me of marriage vows *i suppose not nessesarily a bad thing* and i found it almost like loves creed.
i found the poem quite repetitive in a way which it kind of droned on for me "and, and, and, and" and of course "i will, i will, i will, i will" but im sure could be easily fixed with a few variations here and there.
all in all, it was a nice poem, a bit rugged around teh edges but the feeling was htere so kudos.
| Allyboo chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
| star holder chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
wow. this is great! keep up the good work!