|Reviews for The Reality of Breathing In Love|
| Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
i love your style...its i dont know what it is, and normal i can do even parcially presentable reviews, but after reading your words my few english skills tend to go to the shit. i really loved this, the idea of breathing love...amazing. KUDOS!
| silverdream139 chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
"...like breathing water,
mixed with oil spread upon my parched lips."
"I would rather breathe in you."
A wonderful, very soft feel about this poem...gorgeous.
~~Soaking in my silver dream~~
-Arii aka Terra -
| AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
AW! This one's just lovely that's all I can say. You just want your lover's oxygen, I can understand that *smiles* -
| SerAnonima chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
You don't fail to amaze me... your poetry is so powerful that it gives me chills everytime i read any of your stuff... AMAZING... one day you shall be a very much loved poet...
| escape into reality chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
aw, it's short and sweet. "i do not live in reality. / (it simply isn't suited for me.)" heh, that made me giggle at first...then as i progressed through the poem, i saw the deeper meaning...yeah, i'm rambling. lol.
-escape into reality
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
m me likes... short & too the point... i can relate.. nice ending!