Reviews for Will You
IllusionKat chapter 1 . 2/3/2004
i love this one so much. Its great. two words (well..i guess there's 3): I definately will :P
HarlequinDancer chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
I like the format and everything of this poem. I'm not so sure, though, if the last stanza fits in. You have something really good going, but the end seems to be validating something that you shouldn't have to. Besides that, the rest of the poem is good. But hey, that's just me. I love the message.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
sorry! i have stage crew so im not getting home until late thats why it takes me so late to read your poem!

OK im not sure if the nor should be or or not but i think or sounds better...

Cool poem... I can relate a lot.. the first date thing tho is kinda like well if you stood me up id be pissed... the rest of it is cool altho i dont think they're really stupid questions!

its an ok poem... but not your best1