Wow...That was amazing! It flowed very well-like the wind, actually. Very good imagery, as well. Have you ever read Shelley's "Ode to the West Wind"? This poem reminds me of it; majestic and melancholy in turns.

P.S: Thank you for your lovely review! It's wonderful to be critiqued by a fellow poet!

This is magnificent! I like the choice of language and the repetition employed! The ending was especially satisfying- unique and meaningful. Beautiful work!

really cool. I love the ending. Good luck!